"I'm never going to remember everything"
Carmel Reilly. (2007).New tricks : Thomson Nelson.
After I read it, I thought that I want Natalie! That's because she can remember what I did. I don't want to remember everything, but she remember. Other, I agree with Mick when he walked up and down, then down and up, then up and down again on the stage. I'm so nervous before I dance on the stage. If I were him and the audience laughed me, I wouldn't remember anything like him. Finally, it was funny that smart Natalie forgot to swap the shoes. And I know abou how she can cut him.
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Hi Emi,
返信削除It is a pleasure to see you've gotten a start on your book reviews. However, I'm wondering: Is the content of this book review entirely original? That is, is it all your own ideas, in your own words?
Rather than to retell stories, and spoil the endings for other readers, you should focus on what you thought and felt before, during, and after reading the books you review. That is, except for the juicy quotation at the beginning, you should write no more than you can remember with the book closed.
Cheers, PB
Thank you for your comment.
返信削除I'll rewrite it.
Eri,
返信削除Will you please bring this book to class on Wed., June 1?
Cheers, PB
Emi,
返信削除Thanks for rewriting this book review! Please make certain to reflect the new word count in your Proto-Porfolio entries for May.
Cheers, PB