Essays 2-03b: Introduce myself

Essays 2-02b: Legend of Robin Hood!!

There are a lot of Robin hood’s movies. Everything Robin Hood are very cool man, we thought. Robin was brave man. Both of movies: Russell Crowe and Kevin Costner version’s Robin are very cool. 2 of movies are a little different story. But we talk that we wached movie was so fantastic. They have a sturdy body so we thought that all over the world’s women fell in love to them.

In Russel Crowe version, Robin was one of the army of crusaders. But Richard King was killed. When he’s on the way back home he sees Robert Rocsre Loxley assassination spot. And he goes to Nottingham Palace reach the sword heeting Robert wills. He decide where to live as Robert. This time, Little John was friend. But after fight, he betrayed Robin. Rocsre liked Robin and he let Robin to get marry with Marian. Richard King was killed, so Little John became the King. He tagged with Robin and they fighted with French. Robin killed French’s leader. However Little John let his retainer to catch him. He afraid of him. So Robin lived Sherwood Forest with Marian and his friends. Gum was very self contered. He got everything he wanted but he couldn’t get Marian. Marian was forced to marry with Gum but she loved Robin very much.

In Kevin Costner version, Robin was cathed by Jerusalem at first. But he escaped with Aseem and to go to England where is Robin was born. When they reached England of Robin’s land, there are robbed by Gum. Gum is very bad man. Not only Gum robbed his land but also he killed Robin’s father. So Robin went to Sherwood Forest to link up with there people. And Robin and Sherwood Forest people fighted with Gum’s army. This version, Robin and Marian’s relationship was childhood friend. And they loved each other. Not only Robin is brave man but also Marian is brave woman.

Favorite scene was kiss scene, fight, meet brother and marry scene. In kiss scene, Kevin Costner version, Robin and Marian have been couple so they met since 10 years, they kissed each other. Russell Crowe version, they didn’t know each other and Marian had husband. But her husband died and Loxly let her to get marry with Robin. First, they don’t love each other, but more and more they know each other, they fell in love. Before they go to fight, they kissed at the first time. Fight scene was very intereting. Robin is a master hand of arrow. Russell Crowe version, when Robin shoot arrow from so far,it hit bad man! It was amaging! Meet brother scene is Kevin Costner version. Sherwood’s one boy don’t like Robin at first. That’s because he was Robin’s step brother. When Robin knew that, he was very happy. His family is only step brother. It was tear scene when they hugged. Russell Crowe version was no marry scene. But in Kevin Costner version has marry scene. It was very impressed scene. In thier ceremony, Richerd King came to thier ceremony. Both of movies’ ending were defferent but we liked both. 

Especially Kevin Costner version, there were a lot of forest scene. Robin and Sharwood Forest people fighted with Gum’s follower in Sharwood Forest. As they know Sharwood Forest, they could entrap easily. And this movie’s last fight scene was at cathle. But Russell Crowe version’s last fight scene was at beach. So fight hard though the route between boat and boat. Castle was memorable for Kevin virsion’s Robin. Unfortunately when he came to there, his father has already died. He felt sad at that time. Russel Crowe version’s Robin’s castle was new place for him. He lived with Marian and Rocsre.

Both of two version’s last were different. Kevin Costner version, Robin and Gum’s fighting scene was thrilling. And Aseem fighted with witch who is Gum’s mother. Robin killed Gum and also Aseem killed witch. After the fight, Robin and Marian married in Sharwood forest. And then, Rechard came their ceremony and congratulate their marry. Russell Crowe version: whether Robin cooperated Gum, Gum betrayed Robin. So Robin, his friends and Marian escaped from him. When Aseem fighted with witch, it was awfle. She was so scary woman. And Robin’s plan was perfect. Expect for a boy didn’t realise Robin’s brother. A married couple were good team work.

There are a lot of Robin Hood movie. We watched Robin Hood was very good story and it was impressed us. Each Robin Hood story is different. Also character, place, relationship is different. But we think that every Robin Hood serises are good story. After we watched Robin Hood, we searched about Robin Hood. He is known for famous arrow. But relationship was little different. For example, Little John accepted Robin to join to him. He wanted to become retainer. It is surprised for us.

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Draft Essays 2-01b: My Favorite Place

My favorite place is Downtown Kumamoto. If I have free time, I go there. And special day, for example birthday party or anniverssary I go there. Downtown’s name are Shimotori, Kamitori, Shower dori. I will introduce Downtown Kumamoto. Please enjoy Kumamoto!

When I go Downtown, I always go to PARCO. It is a younger fashion building. There are some shops there. Many girls and boys usually buy clothes, accessories, shoes there. Sometimes, PARCO is on sell. I want to buy a those times but I always miss the time. 

Sometimes, I go to the J cafe to eat lunch or dinner. This is a food shop and drinking. It tastes so good. I like this shop’s atmosphere. That’s because there is always like night, so I feel comfortable. There is a sofa and some cushions, so I feel that I am in my house. I go to there when I go date with my boyfriend. There is very good for date. I like not only J cafe’s food, but also I like sweets. My favorite sweet is the green tea parfait. I like green tea sweets. When I talk with my friends about J cafe, they said that J cafe’s drinks are very delicious. So next time, I want to drink chocolate cookie juice.  

I recommend the Stone Market if you want to buy accessories. There are some rings, pierced earrings and groceries. On my birthday, my boyfriend bought me a bracelet. I really happy. If you want bracelet, ring or other accessories, you must buy at the Stone Market.

I go to Starbucks when I get tired. Starbucks has many items. I like a vanilla late and dark mocha. Also there is good food there. I like a chocolate scone. When I eat at Starbucks, I always clerk give scone heat. They are more delicious.

Sometimes, I go to a karaoke. karaoke is to sing a lot of songs. My favorite karaoke shop is the Hanabata. There is a lot of rooms and all of room’s design are different. Sofa room, bed room, tatami mat room. Also this karaoke shop’s next shop is swiss. It is sweet shop. So I can order swiss’s sweets during I sing a song. I go there with friends or m boyfriend. I like to sing when I want to refresh or to enjoy myself.

I have a little winter clothes. So I want to go Downtown. If I have a lot of money, I want to buy everything I want. My friend Yuu spend 100.000 yen in summer vacation! I want to do like her someday.

I really like Downtown. There are a lot of place to enjoy. I think that you saw Downtown has a lot of shops and place to eat. You can spend all day there. There are a lot of shops I don’t know. So I want to other shops someday.

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About my keitai

My celephone is iPhone. I bought it 3 months ago. The rason why I bought it was my around friends have it. And they recommended iPhone. This is very usuful. That's because it can connect network. I always use mixi, twitter, face book, youbube and so on. There are a lot of app, so if I want something app, I can downroad. And almost apps are free.

After I enter highschool, my mother bought me the first cellphone. It was docomo N703. It color is yellow. I bought it because I liked this color, but I got tired this color. Second cellphone was docomo D701. This color is black and ceparate type. I liked this celephone. It was very usuful. Third cellphone was docomo N seres. I bought it 6 month ago.

I think cellphone is very good tool for us. However, recently people don't leave own cellphone. I think it's a little serious. Everyone has to leave own cellphone sometimes.

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My Startup Labels

• books, brainstorms, drafts, essay prep., essays, free-writing, graphics, links, media, movies, outlines, quickposts, reviews, revisions, typing, websites

Letter to Host Family

Hi, I’m Eri. Nice to meet you. I’m happy to stay with you. My hobby is dance and I like Hip Hop, Jazz, ballet and other kinds of dance. I have gone to a dance studio for 13 years. So, I have been to New York, and Los Angeles to dance. Another of my hobbies are watching movies and foreign TV dramas. My favorite movies are “WANTED”, “Mr. & Mrs. Smith”, “TWILIGHT”, “RESIDENT EVIL” and others. And my favorite foreign TV dramas are “SUPER NATURAL”, “BONES”, and “LOST”. They make me happy and I can learn English.

Next, I want to introduce my family. I don’t have any siblings. My mother is a producer in a theater. She and I are so friendly. In my house, we are always talking and laughing. And my father is a blood doctor. He is always busy that I can’t see him every day. He have been to Chicago when he was a high school student, because my grandfather had to go to Chicago university. (My grandfather is a blood doctor too.) So his English is very good. And he always reads English books.

These days, I try to read books in English. It is a little difficult for me. However, when I understand English, I’m very happy. And I try to understand the words of songs too. I’m a dancer, so if I understand the words of a song, my dance looks a little better and I can enjoy dancing more.

I like English so much but I can’t speak English well. So the purpose of my home stay is to learn English well. I want to talk with you a lot and make many friends! I’m looking forward to see you.

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